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內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介

本書(shū)為高中生備戰(zhàn)高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)用書(shū)。含有以下六大精彩欄目：

命題探究：探究高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題考綱要求及命題特點(diǎn)，揭秘滿分要素和寫(xiě)作攻略；

滿分速遞：選2017考場(chǎng)滿分作文，并對(duì)其亮點(diǎn)句型和高級(jí)詞匯進(jìn)行特別標(biāo)注，點(diǎn)擊揭秘滿分元素；

五年真題：選Zui近5年高考滿分作文，精準(zhǔn)把脈高考動(dòng)態(tài)；

點(diǎn)石成金：名師支招增加得分亮點(diǎn)，通過(guò)改變句式、詞匯等，巧妙提升得分檔次；

模板：給出常用寫(xiě)作模板，通過(guò)套用模板，將寫(xiě)作題變?yōu)樘羁疹}，考生輕松取得寫(xiě)作高分，由怕寫(xiě)作文到會(huì)寫(xiě)高分作文；

熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：預(yù)測(cè)2018熱點(diǎn)寫(xiě)作話題，精選必背范本，有備無(wú)患高效備考。

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分類(lèi)精編2017高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題，立體解讀命題主旨，詳解滿分要素及寫(xiě)作思路；

點(diǎn)擊考場(chǎng)滿分元素，升級(jí)得分亮點(diǎn)；

給出四大題型和常考體裁模板，以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變！

高能預(yù)測(cè)2018考場(chǎng)作文，高效備考來(lái)年高考；

從怕寫(xiě)作文到會(huì)寫(xiě)考場(chǎng)高分作文，這一本就夠了！

在線預(yù)覽

Ⅰ提綱作文

[2017 全國(guó)Ⅰ卷]

(適用地區(qū)：河南、河北、山西、江西、湖北、湖南、廣東、安徽、福建、山東等)

[試題展示]

假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；(2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；(3)課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Leslie,

Yours,

Li Hua

[真題評(píng)析]

今年全國(guó)Ⅰ卷的書(shū)面表達(dá)仍是英語(yǔ)書(shū)信(郵件)。試題以考生熟悉的話題切入，讓考生有話可說(shuō)，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容又涉及唐詩(shī)和唐朝歷史，這體現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)言作為文化交流工具的雙向性，英語(yǔ)不僅可以介紹西方文化，也是把中國(guó)文化介紹給世界的媒介。試題較自然地融入了我國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容，運(yùn)用中國(guó)元素講好中國(guó)故事。根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，作文應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，可穿插使用其他時(shí)態(tài)。

[參考范文]

Dear Leslie,

I’m glad to see you have made great progress in learning Chinese these days. I’m writing to tell you something about the plan for your next Chinese class.

As the weather is getting hotter and hotter, it is a good idea to study indoors. I’m planning to have your next Chinese class from 8:00 am to 11:00 am on Saturday through QQ video at home. Please get ready for it. We are going to learn some Chinese poems that were written in the Tang Dynasty. Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you make good preparations for your class.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分作文1

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to know you are interested in Chinese poems. Now I’m writing to inform you of the plan for the next class.①

Actually many people are very fond of reciting Chinese poems.② I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.③ We are to meet on Sunday morning at the People’s Park, which is an ideal place to study.④ Our class will last from 8:00 am to 10:00 am, then we can go to the bookstore together. Furthermore, I suggest you borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.⑤

Should you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to let me know.⑥ Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分點(diǎn)擊

① that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，高級(jí)詞匯be delighted和made great progress的使用，使文章開(kāi)篇增色不少；

② 使用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句、what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句以及過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，屬于高級(jí)復(fù)合句，顯示了作者扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)功底；

③ in order to、acquire、advise等高級(jí)詞匯的使用，使本句成為文章的亮點(diǎn)；

④ 結(jié)尾處使用高級(jí)詞匯benefit from，使文章上了一個(gè)臺(tái)階。

重要詞匯與短語(yǔ)

1. be fond of 喜歡；喜愛(ài)

例Jeff is fond of Chinese classical literature. 杰夫很喜歡中國(guó)古典文學(xué)。

2. in advance 提前；預(yù)先

例They will pay a hundred dollars in advance. 他們將預(yù)付100美元。

點(diǎn)石成金

原作

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am glad to see you find pleasure in learning Chinese poems. I’m writing to tell you something about your next Chinese class.

We are going to learn some Chinese Tang Dynasty poems. And we will have class in our school library from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday. Poems written in the Tang Dynasty have been translated into other languages and they are popular both at home and abroad. I’m sure you will like them very much. In order to help you understand them better, you’d better learn the history of the Tang Dynasty before the class.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

范例

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am so delighted to see you are interested in learning Chinese poems. I’m writing to tell you the schedule of your next Chinese class.

We are going to learn some Chinese poems written in the Tang Dynasty in our school library from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday. To be frank, poems written in the Tang Dynasty are popular both at home and abroad, many of which have been translated into other languages. I’m sure you will find them well worth reading. In order to help you have a better understanding of them, you’d better learn the history of the Tang dynasty ahead of time.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng)

原作要點(diǎn)比較齊全，基本完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。但短文中使用的簡(jiǎn)單句較多，行文不夠連貫，表達(dá)略為生硬，并且缺乏高級(jí)詞匯和亮點(diǎn)句式。這些導(dǎo)致其得分檔次只能定在第四檔，即得分18 分左右。

范例對(duì)原作的用詞和句式進(jìn)行了修改，詞匯使用和句式變換方面較為出色，將得分檔次提升到了第五檔，得分22 分左右。

1. 用高級(jí)詞匯對(duì)原句進(jìn)行升級(jí)，如:be delighted to do sth.，schedule，have a better understanding of，ahead of time 等，使表達(dá)更地道；

2.升級(jí)了原作中的簡(jiǎn)單句子，如...well worth reading代替原句中的like them very much，用many of which have been...對(duì)原句進(jìn)行整合等，不僅語(yǔ)言更，而且提高了寫(xiě)作的難度，尤其把them改為which，使原句變成了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，大大提升了文章的得分檔次；

3. 使用from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，過(guò)去分詞written作后置定語(yǔ)，使文章的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)更、更豐富，為整篇文章增加了亮點(diǎn)。